Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Clouds (WIP) v2

A revised version of my Clouds project for digital media. Changed around the composition a bit, reshot the photo of the window with a taller frame, and added some manipulations to give a bit more depth an interest. I ditched the text as well, since the theme seemed pretty self-evident.



Thoughts?

5 comments:

Dulcie von Ameln said...

I like your new composition a lot better :) Taking out the text was a good idea, and I am glad you took another picture of yourself in the window. Your design looks great! Good job!

Andrew said...

I liked the first one a lot, but I admit, this one really draws more attention, it's a lot better.

Keep it up!

Adam Mendala said...

This is cool, I really like the way the window disappears into the sky.

Mollie McGill said...

this image came together so well.
I love the work you did with the opacities and the composition is really visually pleasing.
I think it's a really cool concept, and definitely something everyone can relate to!

Michelle said...

i really like this new one better, sara. it looks so good ! and i love the way youre sitting in the 2nd one alot better. i feel like it goes with it more. overall it came out really well :]